What Went Well..
Includes researched quote
Interaction with audience
some theory
reference to daily mail (examples)
fluent presentation
confident
institutional info details
explains reasons why film didn't succeed in USA
Even better if...
Don't read from slides or use full sentences
analyse poster in more detail
lacks examples
more info who are the screen writers
More stills from film (analyse mise en scene)
stronger conclusion
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